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    dots Submission Name: Do you see our history teacherdots
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    Author: playcrackthesky
    ASL Info:    21/f/IA
    Elite Ratio:    4.46 - 463/457/88
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Misc/Comedy
    Total Views: 650
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    Description:
       ok well this is not any serious writing so dont critique it. its just a bunch of inside jokes between me and my friend so you probably wont get it, so i'm not really sure why i'm putting it up here, but i am, if you want any of it explained then just ask. let me just say that we had the cutest history teacher ever, and we liked to talk about his butt during class.


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    dotsDo you see our history teacherdots
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    Well I won’t deny it
    I’m missing you,
    And our antics
    Of him.

    Everyday there you sat
    Waiting for me through those doors,
    Gazing off at those
    Dark pants of his…

    Well I can’t blame you
    I waited all day for you,
    And to get a glimpse
    At that view from behind.

    Well why doesn’t he clean
    That stupid board more often?
    Give a little wiggle
    That is all we ask of him.

    Now why doesn’t he bend
    So perfectly,
    Near me
    Instead of you?

    Do you think he heard us
    Snickering that day?
    Remember that dream,
    I wonder about that desk…

    So now those days are over
    And I must admit I’m bored,
    My life seems so dry
    Without our stories told.

    Whatever happened to that book?
    We placed all our quotes of him,
    Do you still know where he lives
    We should really look that up.

    Oh dear lord the phone calls!
    I cant believe he didn’t realize,
    That they were you and me
    “Kyyyyyyyyyyyyyyle?”

    I’ll see you next year,
    When the summer has ended
    And we’ll start are days
    With are heads leaned over.

    Doesn’t he have the cutest butt?




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      lol Thats funny. I has a teacher like that once... some girl started to stalk him though and then he ended up leaving lol I wonder where he is now... Heh

    "Do you still know where he lives
    We should really look that up."

    lol That made me laugh the most. I love it. Good stuff.

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2005-12-06 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      Hee hee! I think this is just too funny! Reading this just put a smile on my face! How lucky you are to be able to write this about your teacher. All my teachers seemed to be ugly and fat with big fat asses! Ewwww! I guess I really missed out and probably would have gotten better grades in history if I had a cute butt to keep my attention. haha! Thanks for the smile with this one. Hope you are well. Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well done! You set it up with your description, but I don't even know if that was necessary!

    Funny stuff, and I pity the poor guy, although I just have a sneaking suspicion of what you two were up to (maybe that's why he didn't clean the board often)

    Funny stuff!

    Be Happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      HA!, That was funny. We had this spanish teacher one year that was a guy and all the girls went goo-goo, gaa-gaa over him too. This was just hilarious. Have a good one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      oh my god this is to funny. I myself never had a crush on any of my teachers, but I had friends who did. And they would have died over this poem. Since you asked for no critiques, I'm just going to ramble about how much I love this. You said in your explanation about the poem that there were alot of inside jokes, and you wern't sure why you posted this anyway. I think that what we as readers with no knowledge of said ''inside jokes'' got from it was just as hilarious as if we knew what said jokes were. Nice poem is what I'm trying to get at
    Hope to read more, lots of love
    Jane
    | Posted on 2005-07-30 00:00:00 | by Jane Lost | [ Reply to This ]
      lol too funny!
    When I was in high school there was one history teacher (it's always history) and he was soooo hot! My friends and I would sit there all day and just smiiile. lol
    Traci :)
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by onetruesmartass | [ Reply to This ]


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