Wow, very well done. I actually just wrote a peice with the same expression labeled onto "dew". When I post it I will tell you. I think you will like it. As for your poem, nicely done. I love the way you play with the idea of recleansing. A New day brings new oppurtunities. This idea is well played with. This is my favorite stanza: "simple pleasures awaken in me without a tear without those screams" This is well done. Shows how nature in all its beauty can sometimes just take all the pain away. So well done, this is a fav for sure. Thanks for the read, PEACE.
Very nice, I agree with Joey, but bar that, it's great! Refreshingly different, and wonderful imagry, plus, I've always been a sucker forthe multiple-meanings behind dew. I don't really know what else to say. ~ Uriel
actually its very nice i like this change of tone here it's very uplifting. "early morning awakes the day" that is a mood as well from what i see is seems like a better hope for the new day.the second line amplifies that mood even more"graceful smiles from the sun rays" graceful smiles is warming. "yearning to have faith with god spoken words" this ties in with the earlier lines in a wonderful connectivity. "with morning dew elegant and a new" that is just plain lovely. i feel for the next three lines "simple pleasures awaken in me without a tear without those screams" that is so touching the renewal of thoughts this gives me a good feeling to read it. "no hesitant pleaing jerk" small problem with pleaing maybe pleading? i also like "embrace the day with someone new" it helps to have someone with you when you mood changes. my favorite line is "paint the vibrant dew." every word there is wonderful. a joyous write you have done it well, mike :)
This is very spiritual and uplifting, considering just the titles I see on your page, I commend your ability to write yourself into acceptance. And that's all it is, the dawn is a symbol of embracing the new and while the elements you use are common ones ( how could we change what the dawn offers us?) you use them in your own unique way. The dew as paint is refreshing, nothing to hide the real things, just a glisten. Really great job on this one, peace and love, Nan