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    dots Submission Name: bitch now you deaddots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 606
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    dotsbitch now you deaddots
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    you know we the kings
    we've already said that
    but there are so many things
    upon which we need to act
    to you dope fiend mutha fuckas Goochin' for cash
    mc felony stabbed your ass
    And to you hypocrit mutha fuckas talking that shit
    Step up to shanxxx to get your fuckin wig split
    we said crym payz God damn look at That
    YOu sit behind bars now and get your face jacked
    you fucked with us and now you shit'z stained red
    look at that bitch boy now you dead




    Submitted on 2005-07-31 19:24:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i dont get it but, it was till good, i probably dont get it cuz im young. but thats ok! al i get is that...that motha [censored]in [censored] is dead! funny funny! well hit me back..
    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      this piece is very explict. not very ... mmm. i dont know it just doesnt set right with me. i dont really care for poems with a lot of grammar problems and a lot of cursing. but thats me. lighten up a bit on your work...

    with that said i shall go

    Kiss~
    | Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by Kiss the Night | [ Reply to This ]
      damn son that felt like a rap song that should be on the radio or some [censored]. what i got outta it was that people that are pretending 2 be hard do [censored] and get sent 2 jail. then they find out they're not hfard and they get shanked 2 death in the pen.
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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