Flutter of the Bouncing Hearts
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New guy in my life, had to write about him and how he makes me feel. :)
Flutter of the Bouncing Hearts
Bouncing hearts collide Going back and forth in my brain They only show themselves When I think of you (Which is constantly And hardly an exaggeration) They twist and turn Flip-flop and cartwheel And make my heart flutter They are in shades Of pink and yellow Amethyst purple A few emerald green And striking red ruby But my favorites Are the hearts That share the color of your eyes So bright and perfect A blue so clear That I can almost see through it Like the ice of a glacier Symbolizing you So strong and powerful The hearts speak your name They whisper Let me know You will always take care of me Will always hold me close to you So that our hearts can join together And the flutter Of the bouncing hearts Will never stop |
Submitted on 2005-07-31 21:08:43 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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very descriptive. i know how you feel. i have a new girl in my life who is very special to me. i like your poem. i've always liked your work. i've been away for awhile, but i'll be back on a lot more now. keep it up. i always enjoy reading your stuff.| | Posted on 2005-09-20 00:00:00 | by maquiladora | [ Reply to This ] | This was like soda. Effervescent and sweet, nearly verging on saccharine but stopping jst short. The excitement of a new relationship often sets people to thinking in vibrant colors. It's quite the experience. | I found the glacier metaphor to be a little cheezy but I wont hold it against you. It is a love poem so there has to be the token "his eyes are so dreamy/he's so strong and handsome" reference. Overall a light, "bouncy" piece that accomplishes what it set out to. drowning_queen | Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by drowning_queen | [ Reply to This ] | Amethyst purple | A few emerald green And striking red ruby But my favorites Are the hearts enjoyed the descriptive words of the diffrent gems, and i always enjoy a little new love piece, its such raw emotion when love finds somebody that its hard to say anything about it rather than just enjoy reading it no matter the format or the flow good write | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ] | |
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