Description: i took all the titles to each of my poems except this one and put it into a poem... kind of kool eh? took me about an hour almost two to get it the way i liked it... the words in italics are my titles i might have missed one or two but will find out and fix it.
All Ties In -------------------------------------------
Take That graceful Ending Bow
For the night just Kiss away tomorrow and smile
Deal with the Unseen Truth while still Invisible
Listen to the dead call by standing in the looking glass
Can you feel it grow in the simple techno beat of yesterday
you feel hidden beneath surfaces that turn you inside out
the horizons fade into nothingness
the taunts linger on your door step 'i am an addict'
ever since my vodka stumble and they gave up on me
simple faded touch of misery with the evil eye
sunk below the dew depths of the days
of what truly lies beneath me
wondering hesitant thoughts of would i be able to feel my own blood
wipe away the bloody glass off the mirror
'can you even notice' i remember asking
yet the meaning meant nothing to you
i feel the maggots pick my flesh clean
because i dont forget i never have
i look into the sky hearing that soaring message 'love wasn't enough'
sink under those blissful bushes once again
just one more time i wish to awake a new
without wondering what will become of me...
I think that's amazing. Not only did you tie in all of your titles, but they all made a wonderful piece. I think your style is very elegant. I really don't have much to say. However, I applaud you and your efforts with this poem. Those two hours were certainly not wasted! ~SirensSong~
Submission Name: All Ties In
