Sometimes you write the most wonderful things in such few words. This is most inspiring and uplifting. Chaos is Beauty <- at times, that is so true! Hmmm, "the death of melting sunset".. don't think I've ever read it like that. Nice! And always look ahead and never back..I like that too. Sweet write Tiff Most enjoyable. ~Sandra
what a beautiful sentiment, focus not on what has been, be in the now and walk your path to the future... i think of a phoenix rising out of its ashes when i read this. out of the depths comes hope for a new day dawning. just what i needed to read today, thanks for that! @ Cat
This is quite nice. I like: "Surrealist/ color me the death/of melting sunset." I've always thought that the sunset sky looked like a bunch of melted candle wax, so that feels like you extracted it from my mind.
Paint me the color Now
Show me the picture within
Where we're going not where we've been
I'm not generally keen on rhyme, but this is well-done. I like the idea of being painted a color and being shown the "picture within." I guess it makes me think that there's a painting even in a field of one color. I have synesthesia, so I see these little differences in color in solid colors, so it sounds like that. The only criticism I have is that I might say colors because sunset skies are so brilliant. The last line is an excellent ending to this. Great job, Amy