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    dots Submission Name: See Me Crydots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1203
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    Bytes: 672



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       BE honest please


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    dotsSee Me Crydots
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    How could you do that to me.
    You have no sympathy.
    No compassion,
    No romance,
    All i was asking for was another chance.
    But you rejected me.
    Can't you see,
    I've fallin in love with you with you,
    since day three.
    No i guess not,
    motherfucker your just sit there and rot.
    Why?
    You could do better.
    You know i would keep you,
    in the stormest weather.
    But no...
    you made me go.
    You would'nt let me stay.
    You'd rather me stray away.
    I really can't understand why.
    I guess you just liket to
    See me cry.....




    Submitted on 2005-08-01 18:54:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice but you added a t to like not thing but ok hey my myspace name is Dizzychik15 @yahoo.com if you have one
    | Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      This one is very well written. Has a nice flow to it
    | Posted on 2007-02-13 00:00:00 | by onexlifex1chanc | [ Reply to This ]
      can you not spell correctly my friend.
    i'll buy you a dictionary for your b-day.
    anyway like i said i've heard most of these already but i will always love them...
    great job.
    | Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      "I've fallin in love with you with you," and "I guess you just liket to" have typos, other than that I really liked it. And anyone who makes you feel that way isn't worth your time anyway..Good Job on this piece though.
    | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by t0_eazy | [ Reply to This ]
      WoW good job that is a reakky nice poem, i know i know how u feel. i liked how it was kinda out there in terms of style, good job
    | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by CamDynasty | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this poem. it had alot of feeling in it. i think we've all been there one time or another. might wanna fix the typos 2. anyway overall its a really great poem. nice job and keep up the good work! >:D
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by skullreaperX_X | [ Reply to This ]


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