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    Author: CamDynasty
    ASL Info:    16/male/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.31 - 49/49/14
    Words: 187
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 317
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 967



    Description:
       a poem about the end


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    shit the blade just slipped
    through my wrist it fell
    as i sit here waiting to black out
    all i see is u laughing at me
    am i another game or more?
    i feel ashamed to be doing this
    But its all i can do while my tears pour
    if i told u what i was doing what would u say?
    whould u try to stop me or just tell me to do it anyway
    I tryed to stop but it was to late
    maybe this is our fate
    i say our because i feel u are a part of me now
    That night we spent under the stars
    i was wishing we could begin our happieness
    and start it off with i kiss
    things were going grand until, i made the stand
    u said no, i was so sure it was okay
    maybe i was wrong u didnt want it that way
    now things are all messed up
    i guess this is the way things are soppsot to be
    i wish they werent but anyways
    im fading o so slow
    one day u will know




    Submitted on 2005-08-01 21:29:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      good poem, i know exactly what youre feeling, wondering weather the person that pushed you that far would even give a damn and then thinking that maybe they might open their eyes.. yeah.. good poem.
    peace
    danielle
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by sacred_tears | [ Reply to This ]



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