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    dots Submission Name: one mandots
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    Author: JADE
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       its true how one man can make women hate all men


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    dotsone mandots
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    R. Kelly said it best:

    "One man can make one woman hate all men"

    Since when did one man get a brain and realize this?
    If only men knew the power they can hold once they have a woman in love, shiiiiiiit we cant resist.
    The thought of having a mate that loves you, sexy, confident and real cool.
    Better hope he's a fool.

    Foolish enough to tend to your kids, since they aint his....

    And if the sex is good, let all hell break lose. Let another women touch him, and the bitch will lose a tooth. Because us women have to hold on to a good man, especially if he is the TRUTH.

    In reality, this is the kind of man we watch out for. The ones that makes us love them and go straight out the door. Makes us think we'll be togerther forever more, break our hearts and leave us torn.

    All it took was one jerk, one asshole, one false promise, one "its all your fault", all rolled up into one being, one man, one soul of woman killer

    aka......

    a MAN.


    Dont yall understand?
    If you fuck up one womans heart, you mess it up for the next man?
    He has to pay for the things you did, lies you told, and how you fucked the town hoe.

    He has to hear,
    how she dont like trust,
    and dont tell her to shutup,
    kiss her ass, and
    "shut the fuck up",
    "i dont believe you",
    "you jus t like him, my mother was right,"
    "i need to be a damn lesbian."

    But do you care?
    NO, cause you've moved on, still fucking that damn hoe.

    Didnt know your words could hurt someone so much, to the point where they no longer love, they just lust.


    So now she's lonely, scared to love.
    No one gets close to her heart, especially them thugs.
    If only yall knew, how much yall can do.
    Just do right by her, and if you leave, she'll do right by the next man- maybe it will be you.




    Submitted on 2005-08-01 22:37:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this... Its true, so true. (But I'm sure you already know that) My favorite part is this:
    "Better hope he's a fool.

    Foolish enough to tend to your kids, since they aint his..."

    There are good guys out there, its good to know, even though-like you said, after you meet one heartbreaker every word out of a nother man's mouth tends to come off sounding like cheatin words.

    I love how you wrote this just the way you would say it in a conversation with a guy that stomped on your heart. Its raw emotion, we all can feel it... Us women AND the men that arent trusted due to another man's mistakes.
    | Posted on 2005-08-01 00:00:00 | by LadyInRed88 | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this it's very emotional and even funny in places. A wonderful combination of drama and humour. Wonderfully done. Keep up the good write.
    | Posted on 2005-08-02 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]


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