Description: THIS IS VERY OBSCENE, AND VERY DESCRIPTIVE, IF YOU DONT LIKE SEXUALLY DESCRIPTIVE PIECES, DONT READ
INSPIRRED BY DYLANPOES FRIEND CHASE BECAUSE HE WORKS OFFSHORE AND COME HOME AND THIS IS HIS GIRL
too much -------------------------------------------
my body sweats and im tired
i can never compare to
her sex drive and her fire
six times in one day
im so tired
i dont know what to say
dicks sore, pussies wet
im gonna get drunk
that i can bet
leaning like a breaking tower
done licked it so much
its starting to taste sour
man can only fuck so much
you burning hot
to hot to touch
never thought i could hate fucking so bad
but im going back to work
and my dick is gonna end up
lol...this is ummmmmm...interesting I suppose. Didn't realize a guy could get sick of getting laid! Better watch that whiskey dick though! :) More than anything, this was definately entertaining to me! That girl has some damn serious drive too by the way! Good write! Hope to hear something from you again soon! Candi
"man can only [censored] so much you burning hot to hot to touch"
That part didnt seem to fit in too well ...then again I am really tired and I just may need to read this again when I'm more awake. other then that I thought this was a pretty good write...perhaps it could use just a lil more background ...like when it talks about him getting drunk? is he drunk in the literal sense or is he "pussy drunk"?
HA! HA! yeah, I know the feeling, sometimes a person plays too hard on their time off that they have to go back to work to recuperate. I think this was pretty right on, sometimes those nymphos can wear a guy down, ya know? Good write. Like a sore di*k, ya cant beat it. Have a good one and keep smilin'
in a way i do like this poem. It has character and so diffrent from anything that i have ever read. You are so brave to write about something like this, in a way i am proud, even tho i do not know you.
Well done and keep it up! lol (i couldn't resist) Bailey
This is a most descriptive way of explaining to man - "It wont stay up forever"...or...better practice your foreplay skills if you are going to be at it with a nympho... "i can never compare to her sex drive and her fire six times in one day im so tired i dont know what to say" I think that say it all very cute Lisa
6 times in one day? So what's the problem? lol Yeah, I suppose things would get sore before they just went numb, and having sex while numb is just a waste of time. I have no idea why, but I liked this. It was honest, a tad crude (but in a good way) and kinda funny. poor guy! Traci :) ps is that you in the pic?
LOL! I can relate! (from a female point of view) Sometimes you get wit that one person who just cant get enough. It gets to the point where you dont even want to see the oppposite sex. You deffinitely got your point across, and its funny as hell. TAke Care- keep doing ya thang cuz you doing it well, JADE
Hahahaha!I dont know why I decided to read this one but I did and I am so friggin glad! This is great stuff! I got a smile from ear to ear and I gotta thank you for that! Man thats gotta hurt! That really sucks and at that point "hurts so good" is no longer a true statementThis poem is too f*cking funny! And from a woman perspective, I think after 6 times, it aint wet no more either! Oh this is too funny!Great stuff indeed! Take care!