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    dots Submission Name: Travellersdots
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    Author: bas
    ASL Info:    24/f/somewhere...
    Elite Ratio:    4.94 - 42/48/35
    Words: 293
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Red, like the lava that boils inside the womb
    of our earth, our home of abundance.
    The anger is held inside the heart
    and the question remains to be asked.

    Why do some hold onto animosity with all their might?
    As if it were the life line that made them whole.
    Are they trying to prove something to others,
    or only to themselves?

    We are travellers, who trek upon the earth herself,

    One falls into a pit of anger,
    another into a pit of anxiety.
    Yet in the neighboring pit of fear
    lays one more
    and the pit to the right houses
    someone lost to disease.

    In the midst of fingers pointed
    broken hearts, and dried out eyes,
    I'm here to strip this ugliness off my bones
    To say "I'm sorry" to all I've denied,or hurt.

    Pits open up and swallow us whole
    and we burn away with rage,
    as we believe we've been wronged
    and try to crawl out of there.

    But with disgust for our fellow traveller
    whether it be one or one hundred
    the web woven of vindictive thoughts
    holds us down with the weight of our frozen hearts.

    So, I am here to say
    I am walking away
    away for the pain, away from the fear
    away from the hopelessness,
    that once was me.
    I am done with the rage and playing the blame game
    done with betrayals, and frustrated tears.
    As I welcome the light into my heart.

    And if the ground crumbles below my feet
    to swallow me into it
    with the love in my heart
    I will find a way to stumble out.
    (and I hope you will too)




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      This gave me chill-bumps on my arms, it was so good! The reference to lava and likening our world to constant change/reforming drew me in, then the observances of the human race, the organized pits, and the searing hopeful conclusion of the stanzas, that love in your heart will help you endure, and the hope that it can help others as well, was just perfectly placed. I think this one was brilliant.
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]



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