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    dots Submission Name: Importance...dots
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    Author: Raye
    ASL Info:    20/female/Okc,Ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 49/76/30
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 423
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    Description:
       This is a tribute to everyone who ever helped anyone. You are important and I’d like to say thank you for everyone who never did. And a special thanks to Mr. David Bounds of Norman, Oklahoma for helping me find my way to where I want to be in life. And especially for showing me how to get there.


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    dotsImportance...dots
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    They’re everywhere,
    On the street,
    In a school,
    On a bus,
    Or on a plane.

    You may know them,
    Or never seen them before in you life.

    But no matter who they are,
    No matter where their from,
    They are important.

    They may save your life,
    Or help you create it.

    They can show you the light at the end of a long dark passageway ,
    Or guide you in your life.

    They may say one kind word,
    And in doing so create one good memory.

    They can even help you decide what you want out of your life,
    Or they can show you there is nothing better than happiness and love.

    The things these people do are remarkable beyond all measure,
    They guide the young and the old,
    The strong and the frail,
    The loved and unloved.

    This is to all those who never step down without a fight,
    To those who help with out a cause,
    And to all those who are someone’s hero.

    They Guide, Shelter, and Protect you.
    They are your parents, your teachers, your lovers and your friends.
    They are your police officers, your social workers,
    Or simply a stranger on the street.




    Submitted on 2005-08-03 00:00:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Mr. David Bounds of Norman, OK is a very lucky man to know someone like you and a very touched man if you shared this with him - very good piece. very powerful message and great description at the beginning: "They’re everywhere,
    On the street,
    In a school,
    On a bus,
    Or on a plane.

    You may know them,
    Or never seen them before in you life.

    But no matter who they are,
    No matter where their from,
    They are important."
    Lisa
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is amazing... the only thing i saw wrong with it was this line:
    "Or they can show there is nothing better that happiness and love."
    I think you meant to say than instead of that... and you may possibly want to add "you" after "they can show"... so it makes a little more sense. Hope that helped.
    Besides that.. i loved this piece. So much. There will always be bad people in the world.. but there are also so many good people that help balance that out. The last line is my favorite. I have often been helped by just a stranger in the street... and though i'll never know their names... or anything about them.. the fact that they helped me will always remain. This is going in my favorites.
    Brooke
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by melancholystar | [ Reply to This ]



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