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    dots Submission Name: Who'sdots
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    Author: Cat
    ASL Info:    17/F/Aus
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 104/87/27
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 260
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 591



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    dotsWho'sdots
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    Wondering when the time will come
    for all this pain to end.
    Wishing for the days long passed
    before the hurt of tragedy.
    Hate the way I can't be me
    I'm someone else who I don't know.
    The thoughts that whirl inside my head
    are not mine, I'm hiding somewhere dark.
    So confused and angry
    screaming at the light
    and losing grip of who I used to be
    through fear of what the light will bring
    but not sure who's scared.
    Is it me or someone else?
    Who's nightmare is this?




    Submitted on 2005-08-03 02:16:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I thought it was all good. From start to finish. Realy stong. And I think alot of people can realte, I know I can. It was wonderful, I loved it. Oh, and thanks for your comment on Why Read. Greatly Appreciated. Great job and keep wriitng.
    ~Caotic~
    | Posted on 2006-09-21 00:00:00 | by Caotic_Disaster | [ Reply to This ]
      THis poem starts off well but as you read on it start to dift off to another sudject. I do like the short sentences this gives the poem more effect. And makes you what to read more. I think that it is to short and more can be written.
    But i do like the fact that it is short and does get to the point. Need more detail.
    Bailey
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by Bailey19 | [ Reply to This ]



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