Description: This is based on the true events that transpired this past Friday morning. I love him. I think there's still something in this for him, too. If not, wouldn't he have left after the meaningless physical activity? Instead of hanging out for 3 hours and just being with me.
I Think It Was Your Heart -------------------------------------------
Why was it so different this time?
It felt like you were making love to me.
And I fell back into that place with you
Like all this was meant to be.
You buried your nose in my hair.
I melted into your skin.
You kissed me like you meant it,
And you were gentler than you've ever been.
You let me hold you in my arms
And you looked into my eyes.
We lay together on "our" bed.
You rested your head upon my thighs.
I find that I still fit in that crook of your arm
Where I used to lay and listen to your heartbeat.
I don't remember it ever beating this fast before
And I had forgotten I could feel this heat.
My lips keep trying to say "I love you"
Though I know I can't say that anymore.
But this time you made me feel something special
Something that was there before.
When you held me that one last time
Before we forced our bodies to part
It wasn't lust I saw in your eyes.
I think it was your heart.
This was brill and had the feel of an epic set of lyrics. In fact has given me inspiration for a song. I loved the sad little twist at the end, although it invoked sadness. One last time of holding...not on...you drag him right back right now!!!
Brilliant. Can't say anything other than that for this one. You used great words and fitted the lines in perfectly. Awesome piece of work. I also liked the alternate lines rhyming scheme, since I use that frequently ;)
Awwww...haha...honestly I did that as soon as I finished reading..this was..unbelievable. Really, I love reading your stuff! God I hope this relationship works out for you...you make me want it to. Anyway...awesome job...again! ~hailie~