halftruth by bLiNdFAiTh

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Submission Name: halftruth dots

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Author:	bLiNdFAiTh
Elite Ratio:	2.49 - 15/13/5
Words:	83

Class/Type:	Random Thoughts/Society
Total Views:	218
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	400

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halftruth dots

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.. in a mad dash to hack through half truths
i craft madness and stab back at the masses,
who use past due practices to influence fools,
to march to collective tunes,
seling melting-pot crews,
whose bruises are due to booze
and treble boost abuse.
And as soon as its induced into the schools,
WE LOSE...

Submitted on 2005-08-03 15:14:51 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  dealers advertising drugs and what not through old time drunkies and cracks that work the little ones? Short and kinda simple...the rythym lost me for a moment. Not too lengthy, not too complex, not too anything-its just. interesting little thought. thanks for sharing and welcome to the site.

later days
tracey
| Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by fiery_eyes | [ Reply to This ]
  Try to put a secondary meaning to this work as well, I caught what you were trying to get across, but i think you could have made this poem more interesting, by putting more substance into it, so that the reader has to think deeply on it.
| Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked the spirit and force of this piece even though it was a shorter piece. It seemed like something the Clash or some 60/70s punk band would wail.
I thought, "who use past due practices to influence fools,
to march to collective tunes" was awesome and it's so true - our societies are forever using the same failing tactics to advance and control and it hasn't worked successfully ever yet most fall for it. Great work! Look forward to more! Love,Peace,Joy! tif ; )
| Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]

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