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    dots Submission Name: Simple Pleasuresdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 604
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 477



    Description:
       A quick poem @ work?!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSimple Pleasuresdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Life bubbles up
    a Golden Stream

    Love's reflection
    a Crystal Gleam

    Reveal
    me
    Truth Divine

    Grapes of Wrath
    not
    Wine

    Never having
    2 look
    4 always
    you are there

    Unto 1
    Soul
    my spirit
    <@> bare

    I am rainbow
    of Color
    through You

    All I AM
    in All
    You Do




    Submitted on 2005-08-03 18:07:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Now this is different. You know what I like it!
    Reveal me, truth divine...yes indeed! I am rainbow of color through you...this is def a good flow! All I am, in all you do...this is like a riddle. I can get more than one meaning out of this write. I like it and it is a good piece! take care, wanda
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by bigfineq | [ Reply to This ]
      this was nice i hope who inspired you to write this appreciates you as these words are beautiful
    thanx for your previous comments
    well done once again sandman
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I can always say that your original, and that is what is most important in my opinion. You write many times very short and sweet, but you say so much and cause people to think.
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Tiff

    You've inspired me to write really short poems as well!.
    I thought short ones don't really convey the message as longer versions do.

    But you have proved me wrong ...:)

    Nice work!
    Sophia
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by Sophia | [ Reply to This ]


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