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Why is it?

Author: Star
ASL Info:    15 F WI
Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 125 /127 /42
Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Them
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Why is it?

Who do people classify us individuals
into categories?
Is there something wrong with being who you are
Is there something wrong with wanting to stand out?
Why must we change who we really are to please somebody else?
Why is everyone so afraid to accept differences in people?
Why wont society change for us instead?

Submitted on 2005-08-03 22:11:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This seemed to be more of a rant then a poem, it didn't have any flow at all, but it was a intresting peice. You could tell what the meaning of it was.
| Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]

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