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Submission Name: My feelings dots

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Author:	Star
ASL Info:	15 F WI
Elite Ratio:	2.69 - 125/127/42
Words:	45

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	944
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	258

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My feelings dots

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My feelings for you are shared by another
The other I am close to
The other can feel this way
So instead of saying anything to anyone
I keep this secret close
Close and buried
Buried deep within my consciousness

Submitted on 2005-08-03 22:20:30 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  cool poem...although it is kinda short i like it. i will keep checking your page to see your new stuff. in my opinion, more people would read stuff like this if it was a little bit longer.
| Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by kession | [ Reply to This ]
  its nice but i think you should
make it longer
that might make it better
i hate it when my poems
come out really short
but over all it was a nice poem

~cher~
| Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by Im A Freak | [ Reply to This ]
  nice but short, if u amde it longer it could be betetr, i know i do that alot to, i get a good idea write on it but it ends up jsut being a short little poem, but then it gives u something to expand on
| Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by CamDynasty | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.