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    dots Submission Name: My feelingsdots
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    Author: Star
    ASL Info:    15 F WI
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 125/127/42
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 944
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    dotsMy feelingsdots
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    My feelings for you are shared by another
    The other I am close to
    The other can feel this way
    So instead of saying anything to anyone
    I keep this secret close
    Close and buried
    Buried deep within my consciousness




    Submitted on 2005-08-03 22:20:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cool poem...although it is kinda short i like it. i will keep checking your page to see your new stuff. in my opinion, more people would read stuff like this if it was a little bit longer.
    | Posted on 2005-11-24 00:00:00 | by kession | [ Reply to This ]
      its nice but i think you should
    make it longer
    that might make it better
    i hate it when my poems
    come out really short
    but over all it was a nice poem

    ~cher~
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by Im A Freak | [ Reply to This ]
      nice but short, if u amde it longer it could be betetr, i know i do that alot to, i get a good idea write on it but it ends up jsut being a short little poem, but then it gives u something to expand on
    | Posted on 2005-08-03 00:00:00 | by CamDynasty | [ Reply to This ]


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