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    dots Submission Name: Witnessdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 19
    Class/Type: Prose/Religious
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    Bytes: 172



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    The Truth was not
    Hidden
    in tHE Parable

    "IT" makes
    tHE Witness
    Bearable

    1 story
    many versions....




    Submitted on 2005-08-04 17:14:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very intresting way of putting this and the tHE double meaning was a nice touch.
    Yes there are many versions of the story
    who is right?
    who is wrong?
    We shall all find out in the end.
    But it is my understanding that all religion teaches the same basic understandings and beliefs.

    Nice job.

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmmm maybe its because im tired thats making me not understand this. haha. well yea this sounded interesting if only i could catch what u were trying to say. but i do like it when u put "tHE" which i kind of got what you were inferring there. o well. anyways this sounds like this could be a write that is teaching us something. maybe ill re read it tomorrow and see if i get it. lol.

    brenna
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by Day DreaMeR | [ Reply to This ]
      It made me use my mind to think, so i feel that's a good thing. You did not spoon feed and that's what impressed me about this work, and it is very different than your last piece and that's great!
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]
      HEY anothe powerful voice coming fom you and so true to life as well geat piece
    i think ou books will be best sellers ha ha
    thanx fo your comments on my posts i am glad you enjoyed
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, very short but very powerful! This could be open for anyone to relate as they please I feel about God and His word. Nicely written. I like the structure of the poem. Great job.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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