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    dots Submission Name: Neck kuttindots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 488
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       I wrote this a lil'while ago...I think its pretty fuckin kool....if you don't, thats your opinion


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    dotsNeck kuttindots
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    how much nek would a nek kutta kut, if a neck kutta kould kut neck!
    He'd kut every muther fuckin neck in sight
    and fill every bitch with a neck with fright
    those bitches you see, are soon to die
    right before they die they wonder why
    but its too late now, now its time to fry
    now your whole life seems to pass by




    Submitted on 2005-08-04 18:38:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hmmm...it was kinda hard reading the first line with all the k's!lol! and spelling neck wrong!lol! thats ok tho! i still read it...found it interesting...very interesting...idk it just seems to...plain...like why is he kutting necks? and whos neck is he cutting. idk...w/e...very interesting subject...

    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      Man this made me laugh, but not in a bad way. its just that kinda writing that can brighten up your day. nice job man keep it up
    | Posted on 2005-08-21 00:00:00 | by withblindedeyez | [ Reply to This ]


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