Description: this is much longer then what i usaually right i get alot of comments saying my work is short so when i wrote this last night i figured id ppost it to see what you think it is in reference to a thought i was having having about my husband being hurt or killed at work it sounds awfull i know but he is a driller and hi job is bery dangerous he often comes home with a story of a coworker being injured thus making my mind wander
I drove down the old dirt road
Remembered that first night
You said it was all you’d dreamed.
I conjured up that vision
Your arms heavy around me.
I could sleep like that then
Now it suffocates me
In the midst of my memory something went wrong.
Flashes of metal, the echo of the machine.
The sun like always is blinding.
I hear your voice thunder over the noise.
And then his response .
You step from the control panel
To look to his direction
The sound is like an egg breaking
Magnified though .
He runs to you calm but trembling
Phone in hand he dials 3 numbers
It fades after that
I realize the car has stopped
I punch the gas aware of lights on in the trailer
Heads tilted eyes peering through its windows .
I squeal to a stop in our drive way .
Heart pounding, hands sweaty.
I tremble from somewhere inside
My core shaken
I want to run to you
Have you make it stop
Make the seen unseen.
I know what you’d say though
Another rampant illusion
A product of witches blood
You’d hold me
Then kiss my forehead on your way out .
I wont be sleeping for sometime.
What a gift
What a curse
Steals the time
Makes the love hurt
how could people have looked at this and nto commented??, its really really.. strong.. quick rush of emotion.. one of the onlythat i've read taht i actually get really really into it and i didnt have to skim over it.. which is a good thing keep it up :) Danielle