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    dots Submission Name: HATH YOU TRUTH?dots
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    Author: bLiNdFAiTh
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 15/13/5
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Society
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       this is a part of a heavy idea piece im working on its just hard as fuck to polish off... hit me from every angle let me know what you think...


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    dotsHATH YOU TRUTH?dots
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    .. in a mad dash to hack through half truths
    i craft madness and stab back at the masses,
    who use past due practices to influence fools,
    to march to collective tunes,
    seling melting-pot crews,
    whose bruises are due to booze
    and treble boost abuse.
    And as soon as its induced into the schools,
    only the future will lose...




    Submitted on 2005-08-04 20:19:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i thought this was a pretty good write, i really like the idea of fighting to find truth and questioning established practices. cant let the past control us can we :)
    i also really like, ". . . hack through half truths" just a very nice line
    keep searching for truth!
    ~bkj
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by bkj43 | [ Reply to This ]
      I pretty much like every thing the bkj43 mentioned...as well as
    And as soon as its induced into the schools,
    only the future will lose...
    | Posted on 2005-08-04 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]



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