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    dots Submission Name: A Frienddots
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    Author: dreamweaver
    ASL Info:    28/f/WI
    Elite Ratio:    7.22 - 1022/443/42
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       This is dedicated to Mike (inspirit999). I've learned a lot by reading between the lines! :)


    I'm not too good with titles...sorry

    I want to thank SonAsylum for pointing out the obvious!


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    dotsA Frienddots
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    I came seeking refuge,
    I found a treasure more precious then gold.
    Behind cryptic writings,
    a beautiful soul is found.
    Thinking he's lost between the light and the dark,
    never understanding his own worth.

    With tender words,
    coaxing strength and desire to move forward-
    he helps to heal my wounded weary soul.
    Knowing his sincerity,
    without ever having to hear his voice.
    We walk together along this winding path.


    The strength within me,
    I've never seen-
    he so easily brings to the surface.
    Finding my voice,
    I've learned not to hold back.
    For this,
    I am eternally grateful.

    A heart that is honest and true
    A friend now until the very end.




    Submitted on 2005-08-05 08:51:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is really beautiful
    I too have a friendship with Mike
    I am so sad that he has left for awhile but I know he will be back
    You worded this beautifully
    One can definately feel how important Mikes friendship is to your life
    I will be reading more of your writes
    You are a very gifted writer
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-04-21 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Sorry I took so long to get back to you on this I was rather busy, but I here now.

    An interesting dedication to a friend, very nice.
    Its always very beautiful when we can a find true blue friend that you can count on.
    For not everyone you may call you friend values you of any worth.

    This was a nice write, very nice wording and flow. Keep up the good work and have a blessed and most wonderful day.
    | Posted on 2006-04-03 00:00:00 | by Departed One | [ Reply to This ]
      How precious are our friends, when even without speaking there is communication of understanding and caring. You know it's there you can feel it and see it in their eyes. Knowing they are always there. Nicely done!
    | Posted on 2005-11-01 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      "With tender words,
    coaxing strength and desire to move forward-
    he helps to heal my wounded weary soul.
    Knowing his sincerity,
    without ever having to hear his voice.
    We walk together along this winding path."
    you have a fantastic way of putting feelings into words this part blew me away,another great piece of work candi.friends are priceless and this comes across very strongly in these words
    graham
    | Posted on 2005-09-06 00:00:00 | by gd66uk | [ Reply to This ]
      Oooh this is a beautiful praise to an incredible being, those who appreciate our existance - friend, lover, sister, brother, mother, guardian, mentor...I loved its simplicity...Its most certain that these certain individuals dont realise how precious they are to us...This is a wonderful write, I had so many fantabulous realisations.I thought about all the wonderful spirits who've had such a beautiful impact in my life and contributed to my spiritual growth...I am who I am today because of the love they instilled in me, though sometimes they are meant to only feature in your life for a brief period!Thank you for sharing:Kind Regards Nobantu
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by Nobantu | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very beautiful! every line is pretty well written, and what you're trying to say is wonderful. i have a friend like that, that i cant live without, and we just help each other with everything, and we have those stupid moments, and then a fight, but you realize that you're always gonna be friends. great write!
    -steph
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by playcrackthesky | [ Reply to This ]
      How beautiful not only what you have written but also what you share and with never even hearing each others words just amazing , i think mike will be completley honoured when he reads this.
    well done
    take care
    Lainie x
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by lainie75 | [ Reply to This ]
      awww Candi thank you so much for this. the reading between the lines, light and dark, honest heart all so true. you have me pinned down. also not knowing my worth. each instance of me helping you has been returned to me. every word here a blessing im almost in tears. i will continue my path with you and others. thanks for being my friend. i must put this up, thanks so much, Candi, for this dedication. mike
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey Candi! What a truly awesome poem! How wonderful to have such a great friendship! And I cant think of a better person for you to write this about! And it is so nice to see there are still good appreciative people around, who value friendship and recognize it for the beauty it holds! And I am sure you made Mike's day with this as well!It is nice to have people in your life that you can count on and turn to and trust! These people seem too few and far between so when you find one, hold on and dont let go! Just a beautiful, heartfelt poem! Great stuff~

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-08-06 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Candi, you made me want to cry with this one. I loved this poem. It was something heartfelt and tender to read. And it was highly emotional. I think Mike is lucky to have a friend to write so beautifully of his friendship with you.
    Good writing.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-08-10 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a really good poem about unconditional love between friends. It really shows just how great a true friend can be. If this is actually an image of your friend than he must be a real friend. You did a good job a describing this friend. I like the wording. The only thing I find I just don’t care for is:
    “we call life.”
    It seems to be really out of place like it was just thrown in there. I believe that every one can figure out what “the winding path” is.
    | Posted on 2005-08-06 00:00:00 | by SonAsylum | [ Reply to This ]
      it is great to have a friend even if it is online and never met. friends are one's who brings smiles and supports you.
    hey, one thing about this site if a friend gets you mad just dont respond back for awhile and no need to worry of seeing them in person lol unlike friends in the hood lol
    nah it is great to have friends no matter where or how
    as long that person makes you happy
    nice poem and peace
    | Posted on 2005-08-14 00:00:00 | by dudethis | [ Reply to This ]


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