Description: It's sort of gruesome, but if you've read any of my other work you know what to expect. Most of the time, I try to hold in the gore, and bad images but this time I let it all out. It's about a friend that I had that I really counted on and she just left me. And when she came back she expected my opened arms...I think not. Sorry if it's a little blunt....
Isn't it ironic? that even when you say you feel nothing you're still feeling something. I think maybe you could have done this more creatively, but as I say to most people that as long as you can tap into your emotions that's always a plus.
I am left with the feeliong that you do feel pain. So much pain over the loss of someone that you feel nothing else but that pain. I think that the poem is good. Good in the sense that it is short and concise, as to make it much easier for you to get your point across and easier to understand. Good write. Keep it up!
I agree - you must feel something to sit down and write. As far as your friend is concerned - we all make mistakes in our lives and perhaps on the horizon lies a poem in your mind about a reconciliation.