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    dots Submission Name: A Marriage of Heaven and Helldots
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    Author: rws
    ASL Info:    58/m/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 2779/1297/258
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 557
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    Description:
       In my world, words are often more flirtatious and seductive than any woman I've known; demanding more attention than any spouse/child/friend that can be imagined. There is no escape from the desire to write. Bon apetit.


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    dotsA Marriage of Heaven and Helldots
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    Writing in a style
    that befits you,
    like costuming
    the flesh;
    forms a carapace
    of elegance
    draped in
    dreams afresh.

    In this quiet
    conveyance,
    a hundred
    wonders play;
    pressing themselves
    together,
    in the most
    tempting way.

    There is no hope
    of resisitance,
    you're drawn
    to the dance again,
    soothing the
    sacred hunger,
    with the rhythm
    of paper and pen.





    Submitted on 2005-08-05 12:47:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      words are extremely powerful and i liked your poem. it does show the beauty of words but i think i disagree in your description, but thats how you feel and yes written words can do things spoken can not, but really, nice poem it was well done, and makes me realize the other resins that i and other write.

    There is no hope
    of resisitance,
    you're drawn
    to the dance again,
    soothing the
    sacred hunger,
    with the rhythm
    of paper and pen.

    i think this was the best part of the enter
    | Posted on 2005-08-05 00:00:00 | by wretched_muse | [ Reply to This ]


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