It was okay, definitely not your best, but it wasn't horrible or anything. The poem itself is good, I just don't care for what it's about. And I like the title, btw. Also, your journal entry made me giggle.
This was neat, I didn't see the story going in this direction. I figured it would be a romance thing at first and then it turns into a competition. Good job! It means I was definately not bored with the piece. Keep writing