is this about you achieving your dream?if it is this is really good! i like the last stanza" my pulse is racing an adrenaline rush! my desire for one i just can't crush if i got the wrong message explain it to me! thank you ! good job! ~AKAILA EVONNE~
This has powerfully descriptive words in it. I can feel the blast of wind in my face! Great Job! I only wish it was longer. "the wind in my face my hair flying wild the high i'm feeling is far from mild"