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    dots Submission Name: QUESTIONS FOR MYXdots
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    Author: solemnpen
    ASL Info:    18
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 303/339/42
    Words: 253
    Class/Type: Rant/Angry
    Total Views: 848
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    Bytes: 1641



    Description:
       TO BE HONEST... THIS AINT NOTHING BUT A SLAM ON SOMEBODY ELSE.. SO IF YOU ARE NOT INTO INSULTS THEN DONT BOTHER READING!!!!!!


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    dotsQUESTIONS FOR MYXdots
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    From the smell of your words
    you got a twisted mind
    telling me i aint been through shit
    telling me how im possed to get mine

    Why you calling somebody on the street invalid?
    It's like if they dont life in your little suburb
    they are worthless, thats fucking absurd

    How you gonna tell me who I'm thinking about??
    You in my mind? Are just being a bitch again??
    You don't know who I've lost in Iraq
    You don't know who I still got over there

    So how you gonna tell me
    that I don't think of them?
    Just because I give a dedication to somebody
    that lives somewhere that you
    to much of a pussy to go to at night
    That makes them worthless
    because they know how to hustle and fight?

    Listen to the bullshit you saying
    thinking I'm gonna take it
    You better understand, this aint playing
    Gonna question somebodys morals
    when you don't even know what they stand for
    Don't doubt my nightmares,
    until you see my horrors

    These questions come from a quote
    anybody doubting me
    just look at the most recent shit i've wrote
    And tell me why shouldn't think that MYX is a bitch
    Tell me why I shouldn't think, that he believes
    that everything wrote about the "hood"
    is a fucking waste of time.....

    LET ME TELL YOU SOMETHING LITTLE BITCH,
    YOU THINK DARKSYDES GONNA LET YOU SLIDE
    YOU TRULY OUT YOUR DAMN MIND




    Submitted on 2005-08-06 16:59:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      your a great talented poet writer... you know how to talk some [censored] to people...[censored] i respect you.. for as that dude...he needs to watch the words that he types down
    | Posted on 2005-08-06 00:00:00 | by Kay | [ Reply to This ]
      SAy what you say, do what you do, this hater has been put in his place, keep moving, he is nothing. You are so keep that in itself in mind.

    peace

    brax>>>>
    | Posted on 2005-08-06 00:00:00 | by Brack-Attax | [ Reply to This ]
      DS to the fullest. this [censored] knows nothing.he doesn't know what the ghetto is. the section 8 b-ballers and hustlers. the drug deals and drug busts. he don't know, he'll never know.~P
    | Posted on 2005-08-06 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey that little [censored] can say what he wants about ur poetry. everybody is entitled 2 their opinions. but he has no [censored] right 2 tell u what u have lost, and what the [censored] u have been through. i know one thing bout a hater...they be hating. don't sweat that [censored]. i think i'm a do a post 4 this [censored] too.
    | Posted on 2005-08-06 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      I personaly think this is a weak [censored] attack on someone. If your going to drill someone, make it more creative. Attack their family, attack the innocent people they know. That is how I work when I wish to hurt someone or [censored] with someone. I go after the things they love most, that is how you get results. Kill , rape murder what the [censored] ever. Just attack the things they love, that shows you true power, that shows them fear in you.

    -Cynyster Cyanide-
    | Posted on 2005-08-07 00:00:00 | by Black-Wall | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't you think you're over baking this little beef just a tad? Especially for a young man who preaches peace and tranquility in his work from time to time.

    Your little nursery rhyme made me chuckle, until I realized that my comments inspired it.

    Ouch, I think I'll go give some homeless ghetto guy a 40 to make myself feel better about the naysayers that had to read this piece of junk.

    MyX
    | Posted on 2005-08-07 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]
      MyX..obviously he doesnt know what uve been through and how u handle yourself...i mean..look at what you were and what uve become. hes just a [censored]...he can go to [censored]in hell and kiss your ass b4 he leaves...hes a [censored]...man...that [censored] pisses me off alot...man...he shouldnt be hatin...ur good at what you do and he shouldnt be telling you [censored] about what uve been through...i bet if he went through that shi...he would of been a pussy, not make himself a man. he is still a little boy, he needs to grow up...[censored]...[censored]in loser...anyways, loved the poem!

    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-07 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      It is truly sad that this dude Myx feels this way about your work. obviously he would feel the same about mine too. As writers we can only write what we live. The reader can only understand what they feel. He's never felt any of the pain of the ghetto. Don't let him get to you. Haters come and haters go but a great writer lives forever....

    X
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      I thank you for writing about the stuff that you do. I've said it before and I'll say it again, if it wasn't for people like you writing about it, I'd be completely oblivious to the pain, anger and everything else that you write about. I had negative feelings about people from the 'ghetto' once upon a time; but I am far from close minded and my opinions have changed. There are people out there truly trying to survive and living life in a way I could never imagine. I thank you and a few others for opening my eyes to the type of people that are really out there. I appreciate ya! I also have the utmost respect for you for not attacking what means the most to people and keeping your beef strictly with the person that you're dealing with. That's how a real man handles his business!
    Candi
    | Posted on 2005-08-09 00:00:00 | by dreamweaver | [ Reply to This ]
      SAY U WANNA JOIN IN THE FIGHT AGAINST MYX HE ME AND A WHOLE BUNCH OF PEOPLE BUT ANYWAY IT WAS A GOOD WRITE I LIKED IT AND HOW U BASHED HIM I RALLY LIKE THE PART

    How you gonna tell me who I'm thinking about??
    You in my mind? Are just being a [censored] again??
    You don't know who I've lost in Iraq
    You don't know who I still got over there

    GREAT WRITE


    HEAVY KNOWLEDGE
    | Posted on 2005-08-10 00:00:00 | by heavy knowledge | [ Reply to This ]
      I read the comment in your journal, I read your feelings about it above. You have an incredible of way of expressing yourself - getting the message across in an extremely moving way. I've seen a lot of faces & places in my day, I have friends from everywhere and I personally feel
    no one has a right to tell someone else what they have experienced in life and what they should be looking at in life
    I know you said the same thing right above me, Cabe, and said it much better but I wanted to let you know...I feel & know
    Lisa
    | Posted on 2005-08-07 00:00:00 | by ravenwolf68 | [ Reply to This ]


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