Nadia, This was the first of your works that I have read and I must say that I am impressed. I look forward to reading more of your writes. You hit the nail on the head with this write, you even got me thinking of my ex which is not a good thing. (Atleast I got to think about the only thing that really atracted me to her;)
Wow, very descriptive. But not X-rated. Makes a perfect mood for a beautiful thing situation. Makes me miss having a girlfriend. Not for the point of sex, but the feeling of being that close and intimate with someone.
This was well done but probably meant more for those of a like age. I'm older now but I still can recall experiences much like this. The sensuality you have created is palpable and it certainly made me wish I might be able to maybe have a few hours of that time of life again. No more then a few hours though cause I remember it was a very difficult time too. Nice work, I enjoyed the read alot. Dan
Damn girl! I want to go to the club with you! wouldn't mind bumping bodies with your cute ass! Why'd you remove the picture? Anyway, that hand up the skirt line got me and just made my counterpart leap! Damn! Warmth enclosing the finger. How about that warmth enclosing something else...Yeah...Wait 'til you see my _______! LOL Nice work boo...Keep doing what ya doing or you can start doing me...
Wow, very seductive. It really makes the reader and specially me to imagine everything you wrote about and wish to be into your bf's place...lol... well-written piece my dear Nadia. remain strong. Much Love, Khaled.