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    dots Submission Name: would you?dots
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    Author: Seedofbayne
    ASL Info:    19/M/MA
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 55/82/27
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
    Total Views: 248
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 315



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       im tired go away....i was relle bored and gah i love ash to much


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    dotswould you?dots
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    if i ws scarred and scared of the love we shared would you feel me?

    if i like to cry even though im a guy
    would you hold me?

    if i want to get away just for one day
    would you take me?

    i need you now more than ever
    so would you love me for that long?




    Submitted on 2005-08-07 22:52:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      IDK MAN....ITS JUST A LITTLE TOO CORNY....I'M ALL ABOUT THE ERESSING YOUR FEELINGS THING BUT THE WAY YOU DID IT...MADE YOU SOUND KINDA [censored] MAN..HOPE YOU AIN'T OFFENDED AND SHIT....JUST TELLIN YOU WHAT I THINK...DON'T FEEL THE NEED TO CHANGE OR DELETE IT...THERE'LL BE PLENTY OF PPL THAT LIKE IT...
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    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
      Yea well i love it i think its like great! I thnk you are doing a great job and i think these are all good ways of asking things that normally guys wouldnt ask because they are too sceard to ask ... I love it Muches !
    | Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by Thirst4Serenity | [ Reply to This ]



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