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    dots Submission Name: 4 letter worddots
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    Author: luvy
    ASL Info:    19/F/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 270/168/35
    Words: 208
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 933
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1197



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       this si one of my fave poems by her because its so true and i can relate


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    dots4 letter worddots
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    its a cold cold summers winter
    its a day as dark as night
    its the hottest heat in december
    its the blindest part of sight

    its what you hear in your head when ur all alone
    its the honest part in you
    its the smallest thing makes you feel so large
    and it leaves you all confused

    it makes a soldier out of a coward
    makes the bravest man cry
    it makes death feel like heaven
    and it makes you scared to die

    its all for just a 4 letter word
    a simple 4 letter word

    its the coldest part of a heart so warm
    Its a dark as bright as day
    its alive in the ones that feel good as gone
    and it carries u away

    Its waht you hear in you heart when your all alone
    its the evil part in you
    its the smallest thing makes you feel so tall
    but its got u all confused

    it makes a soldier look like a coward
    makes the weakes think their brave
    with it no one enters heaven
    sends you to an early grave

    its all just a 4 letter word
    a simple 4 letter word

    by: Alicia Keys




    Submitted on 2005-08-08 12:08:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey! I am a big fan of alicia keys and I really love this song! its a very good song. I look forward to reading some of your work!
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by manderz_1207 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey gena! ya i love alicia keys 2!and all it is is a four letter word love and hate! i love u sooooooooooo much! call me on ur cell when u get this cuz obviously ur on the computer! i love ya like a sis! o and i got the email to me the extra with u at MAD TV! and they called but they didnt tell me! hope to see u at the meet the teachers nite! IM SO EXCITED! LOVE YA
    ~AKAILA EVONNE~
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      u posted poetry from alicia keys? maybe u outta post some tupac poetry. wait aren't ya'll at school today. do yall go 2 the same school? that's why yall are so cool and always ganging up on me. it's not fair. i need male reinforcement.
    | Posted on 2005-08-10 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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