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    dots Submission Name: Writer's Blockdots
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    Author: Oli
    ASL Info:    23/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 206/211/53
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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    Description:
       This is just a ramble cuz I'm trying to get through my writer's block and I thought that by rambling on it would get my juices flowing...but no such luck. This is just boring dribble. Comment if you want.


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    dotsWriter's Blockdots
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    Gone
    It's all gone
    I can't seem to write
    Nothing comes to mind
    Think...Think
    Nothing.
    My mind is blank
    No funny wit
    No morbid thoughts
    No happy thoughts
    No characters with problems
    or great adventures
    No stories big or small
    No great insperation
    just this...dribble
    Rambles...Mind puke
    Nothing special
    Cuz I'm drawing a blank




    Submitted on 2005-08-08 12:24:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem cause sometimes i feel like this. I had mind block for around 2 mouths so i know how you feel.
    I like the phase that you used. MIND PUKE!
    That just minds me of the stuff that i do at work.
    It has charcter and it reads as if you are in a panic. Its cool. Keep up the good stuff.

    Bailey19
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by Bailey19 | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't think this is all that bad...considering you have writters block. I hate writers block so much. I know how it feels too. I think writers block has something to do with lack of stuff going on in peoples life or something liek that. But really for you have writers block this is something good and creative.

    Mikki
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    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]
      i really liked this ramble.. even though it was a ramble it still had thoughts about you not being able to write and i know many people can relate to that.. its like your fingertips are itching to type and your pen is itching to bleed but you cant think of nothing to say.. and you expressed it well.. who would have thought you having writers block and still coming up with something good..... good job
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]
      i can relate alote. it was good cus people can alwas realte to this. i liked it. maby when u dont have a writers block you can elaborate just a bit, just a sugestion.
    hope u get ur brain unstuck.
    liam/patrick <3
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by patrick o_riley | [ Reply to This ]
      i think every writer feels like this.. if they don't, then they are blowing smoke up your ass.
    you should just write, don't think about it, don't try and come up with anything grand or perfect, just write and eventually the words will find their way through.
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by fallingingreen | [ Reply to This ]
      I think every writer has a poem like this one somewhere. It's nice that even when one writes dribble that it comes out so nicely. Kudos on the 'mind puke' I dont think anyone will ever be able to top that.
    | Posted on 2005-08-08 00:00:00 | by Tarwen Nevle | [ Reply to This ]


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