Description: ahhhhhhh -yeah suck on this for a while world!
I would love to buy the world a hooker
so that we could all live in peace and harmony
A Hooker For The World -------------------------------------------
It can brighten your day.
Make you stop and smell the flowers,
and contemplate the powers that be,
and why they often look the other way.
You see something old and only see new.
You are beside yourself.
Yet you couldn’t be more you.
Feelings of hope and clarity.
Your eyes begin to wander.
And I wonder what you want with me.
Right there and then is when....
the heart beats in anticipation.
The look on my face.
Your smell, how do I taste?
Afterwards with a look that says I'm content.
Spreading cheer everywhere but then away it went.
I kind of hoped that the feeling would stay.
Yeah.......I'm smiling
I just got laid!
I'd like to buy the World a hooker.
We might find Peace and Harmony
a-hell-u-va-lot sooner
ok... I dunno what u had in mind when u related this to the world. But u have a typo. Look of content should be look of contempt to go with the rhyme, but if u meant about satisfaction it should be contentment, which I suppose might create a slight problem to the rhythm. I am sure u will find a way to fix if it is the meaning u want.
I think in way u want the world to get so everyone would be happy. I wrote something in somehow the same idea in mind but about the extremists who think they can blow the world. But I did not post, for friends of mine told me it would be too offensive.
Unlike ur poem here, because it is a bit of a wish of happiness to the world, the same u had after getting laid. And for some reason u want the world to feel the same, my idea is that it is cos u think that happy ppl do not make wars.
Here we go again LT. Now who but you would ever think of buying the world a hooker? I really liked this poem. Sex does seem to make people very happy, and happy people don't destroy the world.
We have mean people out there who you can tell haven't been laid in a long time. If they had they wouldn't be pricks like they are.
Anyway, sex does bring me contentment and give me that dreamy feeling like everything is perfect. Its even better with someone you love.
Good piece and a little bit of a change from what you have written lately.
This piece put a grin on my face. The imagery was good, and the point conveyed was humerus but had a slight vibe of a serious undertone. Hookers, they're everywhere.
hahaha LMT! get the world a hooker.. so whats the world then, male or female? ;)
nah, this is a fantastic concept, very clever.. describing how one persons simple happiness with a hooker could become an analogy for ending world doom...
what I think this poem is lamenting in a way is simplicity. Like get the simple man a hooker, he'll be happy. It'll be enough.
get the world a hooker...all the while knowing that it would never be enough.
well I tend to make no sense so forgive me.
very very eerie poem despite the happy go lucky sort of language.
Man, I so needed this todady. Definately, if we all got laid, we would all be in a much better mood. Just stay away from the nuclear weapons man, it could blow something off.
At first I didnt know what to think about this poem...it is quite different. But I read it over again, and I must say that ...well, I simply LOVE IT.
I love how it talks about how you look at the world in a different light after you have gotten laid. It is really awesome. It is true..that is what I like about this poem.
Aah, so Bush just needs to get laid! Well hell, somebody get Laura on the damn job! lol As much as this is a good giggle, I enjoy the deeper meaning to it as well. Okay, for me there was a deeper meaning, I don't know if you intended it or not. lol Great write, Traci :)
Buy the world a hooker? Hmmmmm...she'll probably take your money and run! LOL...by the time she leaves China she won't have any walls left...get it? LMFAO
Submission Name: A Hooker For The World
