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    dots Submission Name: IV:XXdots
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    Author: Rue
    ASL Info:    16/F/the dark side
    Elite Ratio:    4.54 - 244/182/44
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Rant/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 733
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 218



    Description:
       Okay. You got me. It's about pot. IV:XX are the roman numerals for 4:20. Whoo. Yeah, I wrote this when a real good friend of mine was on my case about smoking. It pissed me off that she was so unaccepting and I just started typing...


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    I'm thinkin, IV:XX forever, no matter what, and intensly happy, yours truly, with a vengence, no one'll stop me, they're all lame, keepin' myself sane, just me, always, rockin' with the romans.




    Submitted on 2005-08-10 00:39:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HAHAHAHAHAHA, this shouldn't be a "[censored] it all" poem, dude, this thing made me laugh. It made me laugh hard! hmm, sorry if this was supposed to be a serios poem about your experience with one of your friends trying to change who you are. That's not really a friend. A friend will like you for who you are, maybe your friend is trying to look out for you though, make you realize pot is retarted and a waste of money. Though fun for awhile. Have to spend too much money on food & the pot.-Waste

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    | Posted on 2005-08-10 00:00:00 | by Abort_Chaotic | [ Reply to This ]
      this made me laugh as well it is a bit of a ditty but with a serious undertone. Don't change for any1 and don't change any1 we'll all be a lot happier even without the pot nice use of numerals and the rockin with the romansthing
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    John
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    | Posted on 2005-08-10 00:00:00 | by hammyj | [ Reply to This ]


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