that's really cool, I've never seen it befor. I do this stuff too, if you read some of my junk you can pick up that I do junk like that to or you could've tried to force some ryme so you could put, can't stop you.
Ah well, was fun to read. Doesn't really sound like lyrics though.. could just be me? Seems too short for lyrics, just a small cute poem.
Some nice thoughts going on here, even if they were inspired by intoxication of some kind. I thought the line "purple hazes" didn't fit in as well as the rest of the piece and it distracted the mind to Hendrix, rather than the emotion you had going on here. peace.- james