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    dots Submission Name: Rothkodots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 915
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 95



    Description:
       This is a description of the art of Mark Rothko. His work is basically somber-colored recatangles. If you are unfamiliar, you can view his artwork here. http://www.nga.gov/feature/rothko/rothkosplash.html


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    dotsRothkodots
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    His soul-colored windows
    filter your sadness
    through the eyes of his own.




    Submitted on 2004-04-14 02:09:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its dreadful and you´ve lost your mind...a bit short though ....................................................................
    | Posted on 2004-04-14 00:00:00 | by caspian | [ Reply to This ]
      Unless I just drank too much, I think there's a spelling mistake in the final line. I read it initially as "Through".
    | Posted on 2004-04-14 00:00:00 | by boompatah | [ Reply to This ]
      I hadn't heard of the artist, so thanks for link, and you captured the essence of his work nicely. Cheers (that is a wine glass in your hand, isn't it?)
    | Posted on 2004-04-14 00:00:00 | by boompatah | [ Reply to This ]
      Please somebody say SOMETHING about this, even if you tell me it's dreadful and that I've lost my mind.
    | Posted on 2004-04-14 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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