Description: I wrote this in like 5 minutes or something. It was a complete spur of the moment like thing which just flowed. I stopped when it stopped flowing. This was sut before a gig, I just jotted it down. It would be nice to have opinions on it................No idea why that is the name but I guess it has something to do with the state of mind I had
yes i can definately tell you just quit when your mind went blank. cause it doesnt truly end. it just stops like bam all of a sudden. its like i just start to zone out and get lost in it and it stops. i can tell you that i will probably add this as a favorite and when i get bored try addeing something to it. if thats ok. well anyways i cant really feel what you were thinking when writing this piece but as always i shall try. i tried... lol i just re read this about 5 times and thinking hard on it. i have no idea. i guess that this piece is too in depth for me. so now i am also gonna have a task to do for the next few hours. lol. but i do love how you worded it and when i figure out the meaning (i always gotta find the meaning) i will comment once again. i really love this piece i do.
Hi there, I think it will be a good write once it is completed. So far what you have is a good flow, continue with it and we shall see a difference. Please complete your piece...take care, wanda
You definitely have a good thing going here. The flow is good, the imagery is good as well, it just seems incomplete. This definitely has the potential to be great.
Submission Name: Madness
