So Horny -------------------------------------------
my brain's craving that dope
I mean
that synapse square dance
"now percolate!"
the mess gone hummin
south and out
hither and yon
jammin, mon
tinglin in the hinterlands
stormin the netherworld
fumbling in bumblefuck
get your
...clothes off
and I do mean NOW!
Ummm...ya dont have to shout it at me...I was half naked by the time I finished reading the title...HA!
This was categorized as passion and it was cock full...ummm...I mean chock full of that. Like the feeling you described, short and to the point. Cool beans. Have a good one and keep smilin'
OK ALL YOU HORN DOG GUYS! THIS was written for ME... Jealous? U bet your stiffie I am. HEH HEH HEH I get the prize ne ways. Hun- maybe you should just read me this kinda stuff in the future. LOL LOVE ur hubby Ben
I doubt you could have gotten any more attention on this site (unless, of course, you were a nudist). This is probably about as straightforward as deisre can be expressed and still be clean. Definite proof writers think with more than their brain. Bon apetit.
Ay amor, you definately just get right to the point huh? I like that and i liked this piece. It was a bit short I would have loved to hear you continue but still it was very stimulating.
i enjoyed the last few lines.. get right to the point.. the mid part kinda threw me off track, but thats just me.. when i seen the title i didnt think to come read words such as those lol.. i was thinking of more.. well ill just keep that to myself lol.. good job either way
i thouroughly enjoyed reading that. its actually just what i needed. i want to get laid so bad, but one thing leads to another and, i fart and she runs, so...yeah~nahlij
Yeah, any thing remotely sexual or drug-related in a title pulls them in like flies. I liked the Jamaican dialect in this. My favorite phrase in this is "synapse square dance." You only need one ellipsis in my opinion, and it should only have three dots. Anyway, this is a cute write. Honestly, I thought this was going to be a joke about a goat or something.
. . . just startd unbuttoning my shirt . . .then the read was finish so now im really feeling unfinished . . . .*running to get ma phone*. . . *brilliant*. . . .*got a number*. . . .
Know the feeling, have been feeling it a lot lately. I like the simplicity and the end, it just sort of hits you. It's like what was running through your brain while you were waiting fpr this guy to pick up the hint and just take you. But he doesn't, so the mind rant stops and you take control. I like that. Good Write! Ashley
Submission Name: So Horny
