So Horny -------------------------------------------
my brain's craving that dope
that synapse square dance
the mess gone hummin
south and out
hither and yon
tinglin in the hinterlands
stormin the netherworld
fumbling in bumblefuck
and I do mean NOW!
OK ALL YOU HORN DOG GUYS! THIS was written for ME... Jealous? U bet your stiffie I am. HEH HEH HEH I get the prize ne ways. Hun- maybe you should just read me this kinda stuff in the future. LOL LOVE ur hubby Ben
I doubt you could have gotten any more attention on this site (unless, of course, you were a nudist). This is probably about as straightforward as deisre can be expressed and still be clean. Definite proof writers think with more than their brain. Bon apetit.
i enjoyed the last few lines.. get right to the point.. the mid part kinda threw me off track, but thats just me.. when i seen the title i didnt think to come read words such as those lol.. i was thinking of more.. well ill just keep that to myself lol.. good job either way
Yeah, any thing remotely sexual or drug-related in a title pulls them in like flies. I liked the Jamaican dialect in this. My favorite phrase in this is "synapse square dance." You only need one ellipsis in my opinion, and it should only have three dots. Anyway, this is a cute write. Honestly, I thought this was going to be a joke about a goat or something.
Know the feeling, have been feeling it a lot lately. I like the simplicity and the end, it just sort of hits you. It's like what was running through your brain while you were waiting fpr this guy to pick up the hint and just take you. But he doesn't, so the mind rant stops and you take control. I like that. Good Write! Ashley