Wow, this was dark. And a very sad thing to go through. I thought your flow was very good. And the words used in the poem were good also. And the fact you wrote as if you were letting us in on a little secret made it even better. Good writing. Maggie
wow i really like it i think your wordings very good and adds power to your poem. and i can relate to it very well i never used a rubberband but i used other things my firend wear rubberbands for that reason and so it hit home. its so sad but in the ame way you give it a light hearted twist and i think thats what makes it such a good piece
i totally love this poem, its definatley your best, i have to do this with the rubberband, but it only helps sometimes, i can relate about you have lie to others that your not doing it, i adore the second to last stanza, really good imagery in this poem, kudos!
interesting write here. though i liked it very much. its like being one way you know teehee happy around everyone yet deep inside you hate all. for when i read this its like yea i just have a habit of snapping a rubberband but youll never know my true deep secret hidden within. "sits lying in my closet waiting to be used and wondering why my wrist is blue
"my rubberband is blue silly" i'll laugh at it and say "but don't worry baby, you'd beat it anyday""
i like these stanzas the best. well anyways i enjoyed reading.