Description: My ex...is in the infintry...and he is at boot camp right now. And me, I still love him, and I could imagine his face plastered on the screen as one of many fallen heroes. Because no one would even no his name. No one care enough to ask it...and I would trade my life for his in a minute. If he could stay safe.
let me tell you that his training, if he takes it seriously, will protect him. being over here hun, it's hard, and yes it is dangerous...but it's livable, and he will be ok, if he takes his training seriously. trust me on this one. as far as the poem, aww [censored] baby...this hurt me, you must care an awful lot for this guy, this is the kind of poem that us servicemen bury into our hearts forever...so in a weird way, i thank you too. this was beautiful micki, great job
Even though i cannot relate, even a first time reader could find the dispair you put into every word and stanza, sometimes any of us would give it all up just to see the people we care for go unhurt in thier own lives. Thanks, you've given me something to think about. I hope he's ok, and i hope you will be too. Shane
Hey, This is a really sad poem. i so totally feel you. i don't even know if i can think such a way about my ex. Doesn't really ring into my ears about it. Nah, i wouldn't of thought like you did but still, i felt you. Another thing is probably the thing he is doing now. Made you think about things and the things you would of done for him. That is so sweet. You really love this guy deeply. I really feel that in your words.
i don't really know why you chose the title "Premonition". To me, it doesn't fit in the content at all. Maybe it does to you, but not the way i see it.
I love the first part the most. These were like so touching probably cause those were the first lines but because those lines kept me going all the way to the bottom. It was really interesting what you wrote and i appreciate you writing it.
I really enjoyed reading it. Hope everything is okay with you and the guy. Keep writing. Peace...Irina