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    dots Submission Name: My Parents Just Don't Understadots
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    Author: pj5
    ASL Info:    37/f/IOWA
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 40/41/10
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 179
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       This is about a teenagers feelings twords another teenager and the parents don't approve. I wrote this many many many years ago......Smiles...


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    My Parents Just Don't Understand

    Teenagers......

    There is this love that is real sweet,
    whom my parents will never meet.
    I try to stay away because of judgememt in rem,
    but no I won't it's just me against them.
    What they say is unfair,
    that some people would stare.
    Parents just don't understand this is me,
    this is the way it is meant to be.
    My only wish is my parents to understand,
    so I can be with this love hand in hand.

    by pj5




    Submitted on 2005-08-11 14:41:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well the title made me think of the DJ Jazzy Jeff and Fresh Prince song...(yea only the old people will remember that one lol)

    but this post actually took me back eleven years to when I first met my daughters father...He is black and I'm hispanic...it was a love that was forbidden...though we have a beautiful daughter my family never did accept him or our feelings...

    definitely a write most teens can relate to...as well as some of us older readers ;)
    | Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      I think so many teens will be able to relate to this. So far my parents haven't had any disagreements, with any boyfriend that I had. The only thing they really tell me...is that I'm not allowed to get in a car with any guy they don't approve of. I guess i can kind of live with that though. I'm sure at one point i will be able to relate to this one fully. I love how in all your poems that you keep the same rythem. It makes me stay interested in the poem. Great job!!!

    Mikki
    x3
    | Posted on 2005-08-23 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]



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