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Author: Oli
ASL Info:    23/F
Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 206 /211 /53
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Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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This is a little piece it did as a response to a forum post and I kida liked it so I thought I'd post it here too. I modified it a bit though. Enjoy.


Pour out your feelings
pour out your soul
let your every thought
be for all to see
let your thoughts flow like ink
through a pen
waiting for your words
let it speak for you
let it be your mouth
the words flowing out like a song
for all to listen
for all to hear
let it sing
give it your mind
reveal yourself
the pen will do it for you
let it speak

Submitted on 2005-08-11 18:19:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a very true and really thought out write
I kind of used the same theme in my poem Words
To me the pen is my prozac
Thats why I say keep writing as it helps heal
Its so true

And thanks for your recent comments
Television was written with the theme that too many parents use the television as a babysitter
instead of giving there children the love
They need to move forward in life
Please take Care of Yourself
| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
  i can really feel this.. just describing pouring out your feeling and your emotions with the pen just to make a change or help yourself.. i really felt this because its kinda what i do.. thanks for the good piece.. i enjoyed it
| Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]
  some people have the knack and other's dont. yours are words and others are art...interesting how both can actually give the same message, or totally different at all. great insight...and nice way of summing it up w/o sacrificing the major things

| Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]

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