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    dots Submission Name: Pendots

    Author: Oli
    ASL Info:    23/F
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 206/211/53
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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       This is a little piece it did as a response to a forum post and I kida liked it so I thought I'd post it here too. I modified it a bit though. Enjoy.

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    Pour out your feelings
    pour out your soul
    let your every thought
    be for all to see
    let your thoughts flow like ink
    through a pen
    waiting for your words
    let it speak for you
    let it be your mouth
    the words flowing out like a song
    for all to listen
    for all to hear
    let it sing
    give it your mind
    reveal yourself
    the pen will do it for you
    let it speak

    Submitted on 2005-08-11 18:19:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a very true and really thought out write
    I kind of used the same theme in my poem Words
    To me the pen is my prozac
    Thats why I say keep writing as it helps heal
    Its so true

    And thanks for your recent comments
    Television was written with the theme that too many parents use the television as a babysitter
    instead of giving there children the love
    They need to move forward in life
    Please take Care of Yourself
    | Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      i can really feel this.. just describing pouring out your feeling and your emotions with the pen just to make a change or help yourself.. i really felt this because its kinda what i do.. thanks for the good piece.. i enjoyed it
    | Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]
      some people have the knack and other's dont. yours are words and others are art...interesting how both can actually give the same message, or totally different at all. great insight...and nice way of summing it up w/o sacrificing the major things

    | Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]

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