Pen

Author: Oli ASL Info:    23/F Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 206 /211 /53 Words: 76

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Pour out your feelings pour out your soul let your every thought be for all to see let your thoughts flow like ink through a pen waiting for your words let it speak for you let it be your mouth the words flowing out like a song for all to listen for all to hear let it sing give it your mind reveal yourself the pen will do it for you let it speak

Submitted on 2005-08-11 18:19:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is a very true and really thought out write I kind of used the same theme in my poem Words To me the pen is my prozac Thats why I say keep writing as it helps heal Its so true And thanks for your recent comments Television was written with the theme that too many parents use the television as a babysitter instead of giving there children the love They need to move forward in life Please take Care of Yourself Ron

| Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

i can really feel this.. just describing pouring out your feeling and your emotions with the pen just to make a change or help yourself.. i really felt this because its kinda what i do.. thanks for the good piece.. i enjoyed it

| Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by solemnpen | [ Reply to This ]

some people have the knack and other's dont. yours are words and others are art...interesting how both can actually give the same message, or totally different at all. great insight...and nice way of summing it up w/o sacrificing the major things christianne

| Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by dylanpoe | [ Reply to This ]

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