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A love to die for

Author: POETRY
ASL Info:    17/f/az
Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 259 /141 /37
Words: 277
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This poe I wrote when I...ummm... had a long relationship with a guy who I found out really doesnt love and only uses happended not to long ago and I wrote this....Love is Pain because thats all it takes you to.

A love to die for

She loved him so much that without him her world would crumble
She had taken all the enfactuating things about the pity and pain in her life and brought it to him
For he was the one who she thought would understand
She built him up so much inside that the walls were hard to brake down
Even when she knew it was getting to risky and she was running out of time
Everyone patronized her always telling her
"How can you love someone that treats you so cold"
She would simply reply saying "You dont know the man I know."
TO her he was everything but to everyone else he was just a fling.
But really he said the most awful things and thought the most teribile things and yet she still does not see.
No one saw the love in her eyes despite the hurt at which lies inside
He took advantge of her love for him
He used it against her and she would never notice
To her he was a love to die for
For he was what she lives for....

That girl was me
Please dont pity me
I have yet to realize what has been happening
For I dont want to know
It hurts to find out that the things that you feel most insecure about yourself not only you think them but the one person you thought would never ever hurt you the one person that claims he loves you so true....hurts you and thinks them too.

Life is a emotional rollercoaster
Loving him was never healthy
Loving him was never good for me

Submitted on 2005-08-11 19:38:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It hurts like hell doesn't it
you don't see it all you saw is what you thought was love.
I went throught the same thing you just have to leave the past where it is because it still has a part of your life. Smile.
Because I remember it to
I was inlove with the thought of being inlove and not the person I was "suppose" to be loving.
Very well expressed feelings
| Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by soaring eyes | [ Reply to This ]
  wow...this is a great poem..i cant really relate to it cuz ive never felt that way and that makes me respect you even more...great job, its going in ma favesss.
| Posted on 2005-08-11 00:00:00 | by anita_89 | [ Reply to This ]
  I really liked this alot... at first it explained the situation then it gave a definition sorta and I really liked that... it seems very original, I cant relate to it and hope I never do but the emotion in it is going to make me add it as a fav.
| Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by ceestyl | [ Reply to This ]

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