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    dots Submission Name: I hate the waydots
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    Author: poetry chica
    ASL Info:    17/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 93/98/34
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 998
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 585



    Description:
       If you've seen 10 things i hate about you this will sound familier but i tried to make it so it fit what i'm going through but yea...still kinda' the same


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    dotsI hate the waydots
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    I hate the way
    you don't say a damn thing
    not a word when we're on the phone

    I hate the way
    when we're with your friends
    they just wont leave us alone

    I hate the way
    I still love you
    despite your every single flaw

    I hate the way
    I still love you
    no matter what you do or who you saw

    I hate the way
    I can't hate you
    I don't try that hard it's true
    and so the fact remains
    i can't help but keep loving you




    Submitted on 2005-08-12 10:11:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this was good i could tottaly compare i actually just wrote a poem myself claled a hate you and it is about how i cant help but love him pretty much, yah it does sound liek 10 things i hate about you jsut more unique well more form lets say your persecptive
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by crazzybeautiful | [ Reply to This ]
      This is good work. A nice twist on the norm original and it kept me reading on. The ryhmn is very good and in an interesting order. i love the part despite your every single flaw. It reminds me of a quote i live by and wrote myself. "It's perfection in flaws." Once you understand that everything can become beautiful.

    Semper Fidelis,
    Christopher
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]
      i liked it alot i can compleatly relate oh i love your pic to but i can relate i like totaly fell in love with this girl and i just well i hated her for hurting me but at the same time i loved her more but anyway i liked your poem good job
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      i have seen that movie! i love it! and this does sound very familiar. i can probably say that i could dedicate this to a few people actually. sadly very confused with my love life. 100000000 guys all at once. lol jk. but anyways i cant really pick a piece i truly like more. so i will say this

    "I hate the way
    you don't say a damn thing
    not a word when we're on the phone

    I hate the way
    when we're with your friends
    they just wont leave us alone

    I hate the way
    I still love you
    despite your every single flaw

    I hate the way
    I still love you
    no matter what you do or who you saw

    I hate the way
    I can't hate you
    I don't try that hard it's true
    and so the fact remains
    i can't help but keep loving you"

    lol ALL OF IT!

    take care
    Jesi~
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by slntfirflm | [ Reply to This ]


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