this was good i could tottaly compare i actually just wrote a poem myself claled a hate you and it is about how i cant help but love him pretty much, yah it does sound liek 10 things i hate about you jsut more unique well more form lets say your persecptive
This is good work. A nice twist on the norm original and it kept me reading on. The ryhmn is very good and in an interesting order. i love the part despite your every single flaw. It reminds me of a quote i live by and wrote myself. "It's perfection in flaws." Once you understand that everything can become beautiful.
i liked it alot i can compleatly relate oh i love your pic to but i can relate i like totaly fell in love with this girl and i just well i hated her for hurting me but at the same time i loved her more but anyway i liked your poem good job
i have seen that movie! i love it! and this does sound very familiar. i can probably say that i could dedicate this to a few people actually. sadly very confused with my love life. 100000000 guys all at once. lol jk. but anyways i cant really pick a piece i truly like more. so i will say this
"I hate the way you don't say a damn thing not a word when we're on the phone
I hate the way when we're with your friends they just wont leave us alone
I hate the way I still love you despite your every single flaw
I hate the way I still love you no matter what you do or who you saw
I hate the way I can't hate you I don't try that hard it's true and so the fact remains i can't help but keep loving you"