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    dots Submission Name: The Waters of the Seadots
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    Author: poetry chica
    ASL Info:    17/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 93/98/34
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       the first two lines of the first stanza just kind of came to me and i just added onto it it's not my best but... i tried


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    dotsThe Waters of the Seadots
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    Craddle me in clarity
    Embrace me in eternity
    Surround me in your sorrows
    Hide me in your hollows

    Veil me from the creatures
    That within my dreams do dwell
    Save me form the creatures
    That pounced upon me when i fell

    I fell into your waters
    The waters of the sea
    I fell into the darkness
    It's where i'm meant to be

    The darkness surrounds me
    And hides me in it's arms
    As long as i'm within your hold
    The world can do me no harm




    Submitted on 2005-08-12 15:34:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I liked this. It gave the sense you were asking to be saved. I like the imagery. And I likrd the flow. I like the way you mention all these bad things that befall you, but you are not afriad, because this person is near. Good job.
    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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