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The Waters of the Sea

Author: poetry chica
ASL Info:    17/f/usa
Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 93 /98 /34
Words: 89
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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the first two lines of the first stanza just kind of came to me and i just added onto it it's not my best but... i tried

The Waters of the Sea

Craddle me in clarity
Embrace me in eternity
Surround me in your sorrows
Hide me in your hollows

Veil me from the creatures
That within my dreams do dwell
Save me form the creatures
That pounced upon me when i fell

I fell into your waters
The waters of the sea
I fell into the darkness
It's where i'm meant to be

The darkness surrounds me
And hides me in it's arms
As long as i'm within your hold
The world can do me no harm

Submitted on 2005-08-12 15:34:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this. It gave the sense you were asking to be saved. I like the imagery. And I likrd the flow. I like the way you mention all these bad things that befall you, but you are not afriad, because this person is near. Good job.
| Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]

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