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    dots Submission Name: highschooldots
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    Author: luvy
    ASL Info:    19/F/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 270/168/35
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotshighschooldots
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    palms sweaty

    heart racing

    heavy emotions going through me

    questions flowing like a river

    will i stand out

    make a name for myself

    or will i get lost in a sea of 3200 peaple

    will i rise above the challenges

    and prove all the haters wrong

    or will i drown in all my newfound responsibility

    will i be able to kepp the freindships ive formed

    or will i lose them because its impossible to find them

    though im thinking all these thoughts

    im still happy to be here

    the question is will i stay that way







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      Yeah alot of people feel that way when going to highschool. I used too but then I stopped caring. My advice dont stress it too much just be yourself, you seem like I pretty cool person. So just chill.
    | Posted on 2005-09-07 00:00:00 | by Drea | [ Reply to This ]
      ahh.. high school.. I remember when I first started, i asked myself some of the same similiar questions. You never know what it's going to be like, if you'll be able to find your way or make new friends.. I love the realization of the begining.. sweaty palms heart racing.. so true.. your not sure what to do or how things are going to be.. but from experience i just have to say go with it... if you get lost you get lost.. i know i did when i first started, as far as making friends just tried to be open and active in class and get to know the people that sit around you and you should be good.. but if your in the same city that you did middle school I would also try to find some old friends every now and then and see how they are doing... the part about making a name for yourself and standing out is just part of people being dumb..no matter what you do people should never have a reason to call you anything but your name... as much as i thought i was going to get picked on and hated in high school it was so much different than i thought it would be..
    although you still have some immature people most of them are more mature than middle school and have grown up a little bit, probably because they're realizing that this is it and this is what counts for there future... anyways just remember that you make the decision to interact with people..just try to be active in class and be aggressive but not too aggressive to scare people..lol... most people are more grown up so just ignore the immature ones as best as you can..

    I hope your high school experience is a great one! Sorry this was so long..hope it helps...
    ~manda
    | Posted on 2005-08-31 00:00:00 | by manderz_1207 | [ Reply to This ]
      Eesh. Unfortunately, I can relate...and I hate those questions too. My high school only has 1200 people, I have a smaller sea...but still. It was well done I thought...and I just saw this structure by someone else. Hmm. Not as unusual as I thought. It flowed. Well done. Would not change a thing.
    *Melissa
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by frozenconscienc | [ Reply to This ]
      this is excatly how it feels in high schooL! on da first day! i was like where the hell am i supposed to find my classes i was late to 6th hour yeturday anyway ttyl!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't worry. I can relate to that too. High school was really scary at first for me, but with the help of friends and really nice teachers I managed to get past all of that. Your poem was really good nonetheless.
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by Dark Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      Don't worry about High School. Unless some real hater seniors find a vulnerability everything will be good. Keep was spelled wrong but it doesn't take away from the feeling of nervousness. You should keep writing about what's on your mind it comes out good and you should impress English teachers anywhere.
    Mike
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]
      urghhhhhhhhhh, it was well written, a different subject that I've been hearing lately and thats good to have originality, duh...
    There was a few spelling errors but other then that it was good. And by the way if this is the way you're feeling about high school, yes its a bit nerveracking the first day but you'll make friends I'm sure and never forget you're young so have fun! Great job, *take care hun*
    :D
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by morbidkittie | [ Reply to This ]
      theres not much really to say that hasn't been said by others already but i guess i'll repeat what they said and say that i too can relate but it was a well written poem because u r just letting out what u r feeling...it was to the point
    | Posted on 2005-08-12 00:00:00 | by strwytohvn | [ Reply to This ]


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