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    Author: silent ryder
    ASL Info:    22/male/LA
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 11/16/4
    Words: 8
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
    Total Views: 904
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 73



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       don't feed me no opinions about what a traditional haiku is... i am on this puny website to do as i please... not be told how to write and what to say.......


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    Metaphorically
    I choose emotional thoughts
    To educate fools




    Submitted on 2005-08-13 00:04:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i am astounded. this is not only excellent it is indeed a haiku (people mess up the syllables a lot)... i am adding this to my faves!
    | Posted on 2005-08-30 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      I actually like this statement. Metaphors are the [censored]. The more clever they are the better they are. Do what you do...

    >>>brax
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by Brack-Attax | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes I also like your work. I never quite understood what a Haiku was. My son tried to explain to me. Now I see it more clearly.
    I feel it takes a special talent to write Haiku to make it good. Yours is good-even tho is the first I have read.
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      I must say I am curious! This is another good write! Haikus are not easy to write if you want them to be interesting and this one is both good and interesting! You are a sort of mysterious huh??

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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