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    dots Submission Name: I Dont Need Your Lovedots
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    Author: bleedinbabygrl8
    ASL Info:    18/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.23 - 192/179/48
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 670
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1379



    Description:
       relationships are bitchs...well most of the time


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    dotsI Dont Need Your Lovedots
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    I don't want to talk to you
    I don't even care
    I've been getting used
    to you not being there.

    I don't want to see you
    or even look at your face
    All I see when I look at you
    Is just a big disgrace.

    I don't need to hear from you
    Because I'm doing just fine
    I don't need to hear some
    more of your sorry lines.

    I don't want your flowers
    You can throw them away.
    I don't need your apologies
    I hear from you each and every day.

    I don't want your candies
    you can eat them yourself
    And here while your at it
    take all of our pictures off my shelf.

    I don't want the memories
    You can have them too
    As far as I'm concerned they
    are just bad memories of me and you

    I don't need the letters
    you wrote to me anymore
    All i need is for you to walk out
    my life and close the door.

    I don't need your love
    to help me get through the bad days
    I think it's time that we
    just go our separate ways.

    I don't need anything
    that has to deal with you
    Yea thats right
    you heard me I'm finally through.




    Submitted on 2005-08-13 00:28:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this was Sick!in a good way! man ur such a good writer! i cant believe i reaadin [censored] b4 i get to my comments..o well! ne ways this was sad..but wicked man..this is true feeling...but maybe you could like say what he did...or he just broke ur heart...idk...but this was good ne ways!
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem was great. I liked it alot. I felt like that when I first broke up with my bf. This poem was awesome. You are a great writter. Keep up the good work.

    >:D
    | Posted on 2005-08-19 00:00:00 | by skullreaperX_X | [ Reply to This ]
      from the thoughts in this poem.. it is pretty obvious that you need love.. otherwise you will be just another sucidal teenager that has become a number in the governments system...
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by silent ryder | [ Reply to This ]


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