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    dots Submission Name: Thank Youdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 718
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       This is a poem to all of the people that know me and help me, because if it weren't for them, I don't know what would have become of me


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    dotsThank Youdots
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    our friendship I cherish, I love u like family
    The one out of few that I can trust
    I hope to god that your hearing me
    if not, then speak louder I must

    I thank you for all the times you pulled me through
    helped me when I felt as unworthy as a demon
    my trust, you seek? it lives in you,
    and my reflection, now, I've seen it

    I want you to know that I'll be there
    if you need help or when you are down
    I have to think that its only fair
    I will help you to get rid of your frown

    I know you'd do the same for me
    because you do it all the time
    and my friend, this makes me happy
    to see that somone will take the time
    To get to know me inside my head
    And know what really goes down
    If it weren't for you guys I'd probably be dead
    I love you all, and I know without you making a sound




    Submitted on 2005-08-13 12:01:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very good! Not everyone has the friends and family to turn to. But as your work shows this author has it.
    I enjoyed reading it. It is good to know that others value friendship this passionately.
    God bless
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by Poetic Cure | [ Reply to This ]
      I love the poem...i know where ur comin from and am glad you appreciate ur friends. You know we will be there...and its a very good poem...though like glassgo..the spellin errors threw me off...but any talk to ya laterz...you know me
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by ria_pixie | [ Reply to This ]
      awww! so sweet!/i like it...one of my favorites...again...ur such a good writer! i think i have like 10 billion of ur poems on my fav list!lol!hey...do i help you...j/w u know...lol
    -Suicidalchild51-
    | Posted on 2005-08-13 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]


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