A vein of the earth,
strolling through serenity.
Witness me in meditation,
Choir of ravens hyme,
willow leaves groping
Reality breaks my eye lens,
return to esp synthetically...
I could be wrong.. but are you refering to yourself as a vein of the earth? If so this poem kindof in some way makes sense to me..
"Reality breaks my eye lens, return to esp synthetically"
ok I dont know what esp means.. but seeing you wear glasses i kindof thought that maybe you were dreaming.. day dreaming.. and then you came back to reality.. Your eyes lens broke and you had to use your synthetic ones again (glasses)..
Hmm.. I have to say I did enjoy this poem I really felt where you were coming from And it all kinda unraveled itself to me like a story it was a good read no real errors any where and I completely understood the situation.